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Mon Oct 12, 2009, 7:08 AM
Writen 14:37 12th October 2009 - In my creative writing seminar

We were given the task of rewriting a section from “The Tell-Tale Heart” by Edgar Allan Poe in 1843. This is what I came up with.

“I do not know how the idea first entered my mind; but once it had it was prominent night and day. There was not true objective. There was no true passion. I dearly loved that old man. He had never betrayed me, or insulted me. There was nothing I wanted from him. But his eye was vulture like - pale blue, with a film over it - and it bought me terror. My blood would run cold whenever it was upon me. So, over time, the idea of taking his life seemed better. I could rid myself of that gaze forever.

You think I am mad, but I am not. Those ensconced in madness know nothing. You should have seen the care I took - the foresight - the perfection with which I went to work.”

Afterwards we were told to write a poem based on a line from one of the stories we have read. I chose the last line from the story “The Lottery” by Shirley Jackson in “The Granta book of the American Short Story”

Silence fell across the crowd
Not a sound
With stones in hand
There was a scream
This isn’t fair
This isn’t right
The voice rang out
And then there was no more

No free writing today. Sorry guys :) But please let me know what you think.

  • Mood: Longing
  • Reading: What I am writing

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  • Current Residence: England
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  • Interests: Singing, Drawing, Writting, Japan's Culture, Media Studies
  • Favourite movie: too many to name
  • Favourite band or musician: Sekai no Melody - www.sekainomelody.com
  • Favourite genre of music: anything that I can realate to
  • Favourite artist: Naoko Takeshi, Arina Tanemura and Yuu Watase
  • Favourite poet or writer: JK Rowling
  • Favourite photographer: ummm.... My Dad?
  • Favourite style of art: Manga and Anime
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  • MP3 player of choice: a pink Sony Memory Stick thing....
  • Shell of choice: not so much of a shell as a bubble...
  • Wallpaper of choice: Pink ^_^
  • Skin of choice: my own
  • Favourite game: LEGEND OF ZELDA
  • Favourite gaming platform: RPG!!
  • Favourite cartoon character: Sailor Moon, Mitsuki Koyama and Atemu
  • Personal Quote: A creator can not live in a created world. That’s why I keep dreaming.
  • Tools of the Trade: black mechanical pencil, rubber, inktence pencils, letraset markers, a water brush and paper

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:iconrose-opal:
Thank you so much for the fave! :glomp:

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Art ennobles the soul even if the art in question is far from perfect.
~excerpt from 'Shooting Butterflies'

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:iconlegend-of-mitsuki:
You're welcome ^_^

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:heart:"A creator can not live in a created world. That’s why I keep dreaming” :heart:
:iconskwidgy:
Damn, looks like we didn't catch each other, I was in DDR most of the time, sorries about that. What days were you there, and did you have a good time?

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:iconlegend-of-mitsuki:
Just Saturday. I was in the DDR area at one point, but I didn't see you :(

I did have a good time though, did you?

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:heart:"A creator can not live in a created world. That’s why I keep dreaming” :heart:
:iconskwidgy:
Yah, indeed. Heading up tonight, probs see you there? Ttyl.

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:iconrose-opal:
Many thanks for the fave! :hug:

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:iconhamuka:
Thanks for the fav:hug:

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